Can some people check for me my written assay please?
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Crude palm oil is the richest source of carotenoids in nature. These natural pigments are responsible for intense yellow, orange and red colours do have potential to be manipulated as colourants. The replacement of synthetic colourant to natural one can avoid any potential harm to the body when consuming it.
Crude palm oil is the richest source of carotenoids in nature. These natural pigments are responsible for intense yellow, orange and red colours do have potential to be manipulated as colourants. The replacement of synthetic colourant to natural one can avoid any potential harm to the body when consuming it.
Polyphenols also have potential to be investigated in various parts of oil palm derivative such as crude palm oil, different parts of oil palm tree and oil palm agrowastes. This isolated polyphenols may act as antioxidant with potential health benefits. They may reduce the risk of cardiovascular disease and cancer.
Both carotenoids and polyphenols are suitable for application in food, pharmaceutical and cosmetic applications.
The petroleum based plastics can be substituted with biological degradable plastics. This can be made by utilizing oil palm agrowaste like empty fruit bunches and palm oil mill effluent to a certain process using microbes. Therefore, this oil palm based bioplastics will make them less dependent on the price off oil.
The essay if good
Just try not to be redundant, I’ve noticed that you used the word ‘potential’ four times in your essay. You could try using a synonym or any similar word. 
Hope this helps!
Looks okay.
“Assay” is a test of ore for the presence of certain metals (such as determining the aluminum content of bauxite), or a test of the purity of certain metals (such as determining the proportion of gold to base metal in a gold object).
Hi, I have made the changes necessary to make your essay grammatically correct. You left ‘the’ quite a few times which you need to use before a noun. You also say’oil palm’ when it should be ‘palm oil’. I hope my changes will make sense to you.
Crude palm oil is the richest source of carotenoids in nature. These natural pigments are responsible for intense yellow, orange and red colours and do have potential to be manipulated as colourants. The replacement of a synthetic colourant with a natural one can avoid any potential harm to the body when it is consumed.
Polyphenols also have the potential to be investigated in various parts of palm oil derivative such as crude palm oil, different parts of the palm oil tree and palm oil agrowastes. This isolated polyphenols may act as an antioxidant with potential health benefits. They may reduce the risk of cardiovascular disease and cancer.
Both carotenoids and polyphenols are suitable for application in food, pharmaceutical and cosmetic applications.
The petroleum based plastics can be substituted with biologically degradable plastics. These can be made by utilizing palm oil agrowaste like empty fruit bunches and palm oil mill effluent by a certain process using microbes. Therefore, these palm oil based bioplastics will make them less dependent on the price of oil.